For all those people who’ve been following the Blog long enough to know what SVEN GUNNAR is, I”ve got some great news for you. Well two things actually.
SHORT FILM youtube premiere – As the film festival run is almost complete. Darwin is releasing the short film on YouTube. Click on the link below to book a place for the premiere. It will also be released on Instagram and Facebook.
2. Feature film – secondly, there now exists a SVEN GUNNAR feature film script. At long last, after hinting at working on the plot for a while, and being blocked on it, I have a feature length script.
It wasn’t easy. For one, I had to write it around my day job. For another, I still had a massive gaping plot hole. But needs must, and I had to get this done now or risk pushing other planned projects behind. I almost gave up a few times, due to exhaustion, sickness, and work pressures. But it was important to see if I could get it done in 30 days and replot the end of the 2nd act and start of the 3rd act to make it work, to hit my self-imposed deadline of doing the script in 30 days. And I had to get it done now to clear the decks for other things.
I failed the 30 days part. Had to take a day off due to sickness, and then completed it on the 31st day. But it’s done now.
And it definitely feels like its grown beyond the original short proof-of-concept.
Future of SVEN GUNNAR?
Who knows. For now, I have to get well, then move onto other things, and revisit it when I have some clarity on what works and what doesn’t work from a structural perspective. But also, now I can wait and see what people think of the vomit draft, to see how much appetite there is to take this script further and to find out what people love about it and what doesn’t work / needs fixing. And to have a few discussions about when, if and how we’re making it.
The script is currently treading a fine line between Slasher film and Action Thriller genres. It wasn’t planned, but it’s how these things can sometimes change course in the writing – especially when your characters start getting inventive when put under pressure. It’s also completely beyond the original no budget roots of the original short above. It will require a reasonable budget to proceed as currently written. But I think the script definitely delivers plenty of thrills and spills, as well as an entertaining body count.
The other thing is that I have a good choice of 13 potential names for the feature. I was never really much of a fan of the name SVEN GUNNAR to tell the truth. It’s different. But it doesn’t really hint at the content / tone and genre of the piece. But we’ve got some corkers, with one potential strong contender / early favourite to consider for the future.
However, I may yet scale it back a bit, take it more into horror territory in the next draft. But for now, I’m happy that another goal has been achieved for this year. And that people can finally see the short above, and we can find out if despite its flaws, is there an appetite for a feature?
Anyway, I hope you enjoy it. Click on the link above and enjoy the short!
Also, SVEN GUNNAR – the short film – has been selected to two film festivals: to the Osaka International Film Festival Japan and to Kinosmena Short Film Festival in Belarus. This is great news, especially as I am 58 pages into writing the feature film version!
We just found out today that the dark horror script for IMPRINT has won its fifth award! Nice. This time it was for Best Unproduced Short Script at the Fantastic Festival of Los Angeles. Many thanks! that’s great news.
Let’s hope some producers, keen to get involved in helping bring this to the screen take notice. And I am super grateful for these 5 awards.
We’re very happy to be able to learn that the super dark horror Short Script IMPRINT has been awarded its 4th award for Best Script at the LA Sun Fest. This is huge news and so many in such a short space of time. We’re very grateful.
The short script for IMPRINT now has its 4th official festival selection, in a week where we also received some very positive but also confusing feedback from another prestigious screenplay festival (where the reader clearly didn’t seem to pick up on some obvious plot elements that other festivals had no issues with) the film has now been selected and also made a Finalist in the Hollywood Blood Horror Festival (where COMFORT HIM won Best Horror). This is great news for a short that I was doubting was too dark for most festivals.
Ironically it comes on the same day where MR CLEAN was rejected from another fest, due to high competition. So it’s all swings and roundabouts.
But this week, good progress has been made on a new feature film script. We’re officially 15 pages in writing SVEN GUNNAR the feature. 🙂
It’s been a good week in festivals for IMPRINT. Not so good for GAS! The IMPRINT poster was shared by a festival which is considering its selection, was then selected by the Berlin Movie Awards, was selected by and then has been considered as a Finalist in the Vancouver Independent Film Festival and lastly, received extremely detailed, positive and insightful feedback from the Portland Screenplay Awards – although we’ve got to wait to see it if places in that competition. However, GAS! didn’t make the quarter finals of one of the most prestigious top-tier screenplay festivals.
I share this because some people might be forgiven for assuming that these scripts are always winning. They’re not. And as this top-tier fest explained, writing is subjective, so what might not even get selected at one festival, may in fact win at another. So if you’re a writer who’s keen to find out where there writing is currently at, I would recommend getting people to read it and eventually trying to enter into some festivals to get some form of benchmarking.
Also, two potential planned short films, that were being discussed and considered for production in the coming months, are no longer happening. I don’t understand the sudden change in viewpoint, but I wholeheartedly agree with the reason why – which is it’s time to get features happening. Although I definitely still want to make some quality shorts, like SEPULTURE, GAS! and IMPRINT, which would serve as proof-of-concepts for more ambitious feature-length projects, I do have a burning need to make a feature. However, IMPRINT is definitely a short worth making and I am going to start actively shopping that one around to find a way to get it made, even if someone else directs it. Currently though, it will need some investment – just to help us pull off a couple of key moments / give it the production value it warrants.
Luckily, the latest screenplay, for my vampire feature BLOOD RAGE, has had two reads, and both “loved” it. Still waiting on two other readers. But so far so good. Despite then dealing with the crushing weight of being exhausted after delivering that script on top of my other work demands, I am now making progress on the planning of my next feature project. And work is resuming on the micro short film TUMBLE DYING, which has been sadly neglected of late. I need to get it done.
I did a thing. Because I wanted to. And I feel good that one of my goals for this year has been achieved. If short of time, move along….
Back in 1999 – 2000, I wrote something called UNDER A SPELL. It started as a weird way to kill time, while doing a stint behind the information desk of the library I worked in. I had an idea for a short horror scene and created a 10-page short around it. That short was called BLOOD RAGE. It was about a bungled robbery and a lab full of very angry rats. I then felt inspired, after talking with a friend about how the world I’d created behind that short might be fun to do as a feature – but something ‘low budget’ – so no killer rats… because with the technology we had access to then, how the hell was that going to be possible?
That friend and I were talking at Whitby Goth Fest, about the festival, the town itself, and how if we wrote a film and set it during the festival, we could show the world a unique glimpse into this world and have an interesting backdrop to the main narrative. So I went away and expanded it into a full-blown horror feature.
In case you don’t know about Whitby Goth Fest, here’s a few facts:
Whitby was where Dracula’s ship landed in the novel. It was also where, within the novel, Dracula takes his first victim in the UK. There’s a Dracula museum there. More facts.
It has a bi-annual Goth festival (founded in 1984). Around 10,000 Goths visit the town twice a year in April and again in October for the Goth fest, partying hard for 5 days and it got so big that they needed extra venues to host the larger crowds.
The event results in business for the town in general, with attendees spending around 10,000 bed-nights in Whitby and the weekend contributing £1.1 million per annum to the local economy.
So my rationale at the time, was that potentially, you’d have an interesting backdrop, lots of willing extras, some great bands to be in the soundtrack and bring their audiences and some potential niche audiences for the film. if you filmed the gigs too, you’d have a great behind the scenes / ancillary market. You could combine the festival and filming and hopefully enjoy the best of both worlds. And Whitby was my favourite holiday location growing up – as I briefly lived just down the coast in Scarborough. In fact, I really wanted to move there until property prices in the UK went mental. So I didn’t need an excuse to spend more time there.
Get on with it
Anyway, so I wrote the original feature film and then my friend announced that he was no longer into making films and he didn’t even read it. So rather than show it to anybody else, I shelved it. Crushed. That’s just who I was back then. And besides, not longer after, I started drifting away from the Goth scene.
Years later, we reconnected on social media and we joked about that fake religion he was going to set up – The Church of Vodka. I was a confirmed Bishop and missionary, back then, dedicated to spreading the word one shot at a time. And we joked about how I had included it in the script and some characters inspired by real people. And talks resumed about how we should totally consider making the movie after all… and then he died – far too young. It was a shock and he was massively missed by so many people. The script got shoved back into the dark recesses of my mind and forgotten.
Recently, when getting one of those insensitive nudges from Facebook, as you do, telling you to think about the good times with that person, but instead reminding you of their death and giving you a link to the messages of mourning. Once I recovered from the shock of being thrust into an emotional space by a random social media post, I was reminded of this script once again. I was amazed that I had been going around thinking that I had only written 4 feature films, when there was in fact a 5th, sitting unloved and forgotten.
So over a month ago, I enjoyed access to the London Screenwriters’ Festival platform and saw Pat Higgins give an amusing talk on how to WRITE A MOVIE IN 30 DAYS – something I really do think you should check out, if you don’t mind paying for the subscription to the platform. The first one I saw was about writing a feel good movie, a romance / comedy. But I saw that he had previously given talks on the same subject and also how to tap into childhood fears. Sadly, I was deep in plotting and planning on two features – SVEN GUNNAR and BLÖT. But I wondered if I could have a crack at this technique – but do a horror movie instead? But I had doubts…
Why try to write a movie in 30 days?
The first feature I ever wrote, was completed in 7-10 days I believe – when staying home sick, full of some lurgy. But although it had moments, it really could have benefitted from structure. People loved the characters and the world, but it didn’t pay off in the right way. But that’s what you get from vomiting out a draft, with no planning / plotting. And I had no distractions, other than getting more tissue to blow my nose into, more drinks or going to the loo.
The last time I wrote UNDER A SPELL, it had taken a few months of evenings and weekends. Mainly because I made it up as I went, in any free moments. But could I do it quicker?
Could I write a feature script in 30 days, when working and already up against tough timelines (having to deliver 200 pages of scripts for work during the same period)? That was a good question. I wrestled with it enough until I said “eff it”. And then I said to myself: “You’ll only know the answer if you try.”
But could I also do it with a better structure / plot?
I knew I couldn’t do it with SVEN GUNNAR and BLÖT, not without solving the act two to act three plot holes. And I didn’t want to pants it. But seeing that reminder of Tom, made me think about UNDER A SPELL and how with some tweaks, with some proper work to pin down theme, character and basically do the things I never did back then, but following Pat’s techniques, I could have a fair crack at a rewrite. And maybe by the end it might just be readable.
How did it go?
I did not get the script written in 30 days.
It took me 35 days.
I had set my heart on the 15th March. And I completed it on the 20th March.
But yayyyyyyyy! I wrote the damn script. I got it done, despite having to write during the day and often only having 1.5 hrs max to write with before downing tools and resting my eyes and brain. I did it, when fighting the urge to nap, after having eaten my evening meal, and basically doing it at completely the wrong times, with me having to battle oodles of distractions. But I used some of my tricks to help gee me on.
Tweet about it – although I didn’t expressly tell people what I was trying to achieve, I did put it out there that I was writing something and publicly shared the number of pages I got through each day. I mostly mentioned when I was starting and how much I got done each day when I finished. And I tried to note down in my journal how it felt, because there are days when you want to give up. But there are days when it feels amazing and you hit a flow.
Best use of available time – Mornings and days were for ideas. Noting down random ideas that might work to enhance the plot / better pay-offs etc. Evenings and weekends were for writing.
Weekends are for sprints – Weekends are your friend, as long as your family / partner etc don’t hate you, and know what you’re trying to achieve, you can use the time to do sprints. Of an evening I would get 2.5 4.5 pages done. Of a weekend, I’d get as many as 12 pages done (depending on how much housework needed doing).
Immerse yourself in that world – I had fun reconnecting with lots of music that I don’t usually listen too much anymore, sadly. Watching old Punk and Goth music videos, and old videos and photos of the festival that I could find. And looking up pictures of local attractions and sights, especially pictures of the Abbey.
Headphones on – Frequently, text messages would ping, TV programmes would be blaring out and people were trying to start conversations. Those times, you just have to be rigid and get headphones on, and clearly communicate that you’re trying to block out the world and get on with it. Binaural music and meditation helps (like Brain.fm) I use it all the time in Pomodoro sessions during the day, to help me focus and power through work. And then once I’m in the zone and need a little pick-me-up, it’s time to put on a pumping playlist and get swept away with the music.
If all else fails, Vodka – there were times when even meditation wouldn’t help, when my energy was low and I was writing about these party people and needed to kind of feel that energy and even the music wasn’t getting me there. For this script – I wouldn’t recommend it as a general practice – it helped me connect with the subject better, for three sessions where I was close to giving up and where I was writing about the Church of Vodka.
Rest! – There were days when I had to listen to my brain / body and just not write. They were hard. But when migraines struck – I think it happened twice through this script – you have to rest. I wasn’t fit for anything, other than listening to music and maybe reading the odd book (vision allowing) to get my head working again.
Editing – The last ten days of the writing process, in Pat’s methodology, are for rewriting / editing. I didn’t do that. I think it’s why it took me longer. I edited as I went. Because I can’t find enough time to stay in that world, and have to fill my brain with the other subjects I’m writing about during work days, I found that I could only get into the groove, and find where I am mentally, is by re-reading the previous days pages and then giving them a polish – because rewriting is writing – and then I could tackle the new pages for the day. So probably not recommended to do it that way at all. But it worked for me.
So after that’s done, what happens? does it go back into a deep dark drawer to be forgotten?
I hope not. Actually, I have already let a few people read it. It’s strange, because it is after all a sort of ‘vomit draft’. And normally you should only send out the most polished work, but I think I’d like some feedback on it, to help me see how to approach any rewrites in the near future. So thank you to those awesome people who wanted to read it.
But no, right now I’m resting. But I’m gearing up to get back into finishing the plotting of SVEN GUNNAR and BLÖT. They’re next on my hit list. I am SO ready to write these. If only the plot matched those expectations! And they are essential to future goals.
But with regards to BLOOD RAGE, I would very much like it to find a home, some investment and a team that gets where this odd script is coming from and wants to help get it done. I think it’d be a lovely tribute to the past, to an old friend’s crazy idea to shoot a film in Whitby and a reasonably unique addition to the Vampire / Horror genres.